the plaid looks weird...
the dress hides the garter, maybe oyu could put slits in it so you could still see some leg?
you could add a plaid bow in her hair or on her shoes [bows]. or anywhere, for that matter.
This is kind of a repeat of my comment on the other pic of her you posted...^^;
So, she's a Bush Dog, eh?
That's a new one! I never knew there was an endangered dog species...
Good job, so far, but why is her outfit plaid?? Usually Mew Mew outfits are one solid color, with diffrent colored accents.
Hmmm, I bet you could still keep the plaid, if you tone it down a bit. I've seen some fanmews do have stripes or spots on their outfits...
By the way, Pandapants has a point. You may want to consider her coloring. Sounds more like the coloring of a cake or candy than a berry.
Anyway, you did a good job on the anatomy; but as somebody else pointed out, there is the arm thing, and of course her invisible legs.
I think the leg thing is alright, though, becuase I can kind of see their outlines, so that's okay.
Overall, nice work!
~Potato-chan!!~
I have to agree with Panda a litte here. But what I also notice is that her left arm is shorter then her right. But everything esle looks fine. So just keep up the great work.
I have no idea what's up with the plaid... but whatever. What I'm more concerned with is her coloration. What sort of boysenberry is light pink and light blue? They seem to be more purplish or black to me.
It's nice that she's not a badly-done Berii clone anymore, though.
Please Give Cred-it To Me For Suggesting The Bush Dog.
:0
Anyway, Well, I Dunno If The Girls Will Except.. But They Might.
But Please Make Another One Of This, AND COLORED XD
Lol Great Job
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